Some new tunes I wrote

[phan]

I had this melody going through my head all day at work a couple days ago so i came home and started doodling on the guitar and about 2 hours later I had this little demo...i've never gone from an idea to a somewhat finished product so fast. If nothing else the lyrics always slow me down quite a bit but these kinda flowed as I wrote about my cousin who's in a terrible relationship right now.

Obviously I need bass/drums and the rhythm is pretty sloppy but what do you think?


edit: ugh...looks like my widgets aren't working. use this







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